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Deep undergroup is the land of the drows. few topsiders venture down there. but those who do are captured and put into slavery. The large city of Lathaning. Lays spawled out in a huge cavern. there are huge walls around the city and a large waterfall cascades down the cavern wall beside the city the river flowing through the city. on one side is the large palace and the rest is the city. althought there is no sunlight there is alternate light such as the magic orbs (like pyreflies for those whove played ff10) magic is abundant in the city but very few can wield it. those who can are often persecuted. only the priestess and her students arent. the city is rich and peacful but there are underground gangs and the rival tribes are on the verge of a war. in this world the women rule. men are secondary citizens. Men are not aloud to lay eyes on the rich and powerful in the city unless they are given permission. the city is ruled by the queen Ilarana. who altough is a dictator takes care of her city to an extent. she has become withdrawn from it and has lost sight of thier needs. she instead relies on her soliders. a band of women who forceful in thier show for apparent peace. they tend to use more forceful means to show people. the drows are full of tradition and history. and the punishment for breaking old tradtions is punishable by usually death.
the drows have purple or blue skin. and pale hair.
rules: if you are a human/ elf or anything found on the surface you must be a slave or escaping. if you are male. you MUST attend to the rules that women are hugher. it is ancient traditions punishable by death. no rebeling to badly. like no storming the castle. keep it clean no sex slaves *looks at neko*
and btw i am using another world i have read about i didnt make it up incase you think i have soemthing again men.
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« Reply #1 on: June 14, 2006, 06:32:52 PM » |
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Lannia sat in the hall playing with her food. she looked up at her mother and sisters, she looked back at her food and sighed. "mother may i be excused" before waiting for an answer she stood up and walked out. going up to her room she stood on the balcony and looked out on the busy city.she looekd at her hands. they began to feel warm. she clenched her fists beging it would go away.
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« Reply #2 on: June 15, 2006, 09:13:25 PM » |
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Squall is ordinary Human who lived on the surface.All his life he has wanted to go underground and see the world down there.He grows up on the surface training with a blade so he can venture to the caverns.He finally becomes 18 and sets of to the caverns underground but as soon as he enters the caverns he See's a city but before he can appreciate the magnificence of the city he is captured.Squall tries to explain his self but no one listens he begs to see someone in charge............
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« Reply #3 on: June 15, 2006, 09:20:27 PM » |
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lannia went back into her room she was about to grab her cloak when her sister came in. "mother says we need a new slave. she wants you to go with her to get one so get dressed." her sister was very tall and her face was tight and harse but there was soem beauty in there. Lannia scowled at her. "fine!" she went to her cupboard and changed. then went downstairs to meet her mother. they headed out to the street.
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« Reply #4 on: June 15, 2006, 10:41:23 PM » |
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squall struggles with the gaurds as they take him to a cell to be held and take his sword as soon as the sword is taken from him he swings and punches the guard straight in the mouth and grabs his sword and says "dont touch my blade my father gave that to me before he died" and then gets grabed from behind and restrained as they take his blade and lock him up so there he waits
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« Reply #5 on: June 16, 2006, 01:05:16 PM » |
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Lannia scowled and clenched her fists and they headed along the dark streets. her mother smiled and waved to passers by that she knew. she never ever made eye contact with any slaves or servants. Lannia pulled her cloak tighter and sighed. she hated this town. she hated everything. again there was the burning under her palms. she closed her eyes tight making it going away.
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« Reply #6 on: June 16, 2006, 03:14:42 PM » |
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squall reachs under his shoe pulls out his dagger and puts it behind his back he waits till a guard comes to move him to a better cell as soon as the guard opens the door Squall pulls the dagger from behind his back and stabs the guard in the neck before the guard can hit the ground Squal is gone he runs till he see's the city he runs right down the main road hoping to get some assistance
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« Reply #7 on: June 16, 2006, 07:58:04 PM » |
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Lannia saw a commotion up ahead. she couldnt see what was happening but she became interested. she walked beside her mother trying to see what was going on.
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« Reply #8 on: June 17, 2006, 01:23:00 AM » |
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Squall runs down the street as fast as he can and he remembers he forgot his blade he turns around to go retrieve it and he gets tackled by a guard who was chasing him he gets restrained on the ground right infront of a liitle girl her sister and her mother
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« Reply #9 on: June 17, 2006, 06:24:04 AM » |
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Lannia pulls her little sister back and looks at the man on the floor. it was a human. she gasped it was a man aswell. a human man his pale skin was something unknown underground in the streets. she'd never seen a human struggle before. she looked at her mother. and thought. she had always been taught that humans were happy as slaves. she thought. her mother carried on on towards the slave market and lannia threw a glance back at the man. she was curious. "mother i will ctach up." her mother nodded. Lannia walked over to the guard holding the human. "is he a slave?"
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« Reply #10 on: June 17, 2006, 02:31:46 PM » |
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squall hears the girl asking the person holding him if he's a slave he shouts out in anger "I'm no slave" he explains to the girl he is from the surface and as soon as he came underground he got captured
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« Reply #11 on: June 17, 2006, 02:50:54 PM » |
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Lannia didnt know mucch of the human language. but she recognised the word slave. she turned her head. "how much will he cost? I am needing a new guard."
he guard looks at her. "hes a crazy loonatic. why not get a well trained guard from the sales." Lannia knew how to handle men. "excuse me? i didnt ask for your oppinion. i dont want a well trained guard. when i want a mans oppion i will tell you but until then tell me how much this man costs. and i will pay it."
he was caught by her sternus he let go of him "gimme one gol and hes yours." Lannia threw him a coin and turned to the slave. she spoke a little surface that she knew. "no run? please?" she turned back to the guards. "i want his items aswell. whatever he was brought with."
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« Reply #12 on: June 18, 2006, 12:57:02 AM » |
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squall barly understands whats going on but then he fells the guard release him and the girl speak to him he just looks at her says "I wont run i owe u my life" and so he follows the little girl and as they walk away he gives the guard that held him down the finger....
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« Reply #13 on: June 18, 2006, 07:56:27 AM » |
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they headed back and the guard went inside. Lannia looked at the human with curosity. she didnt know what to say but she felt so sorry for him. the guard came out and handed her a sack. the handle of a sword sticking out. Lannia took it. turning to the human she nodded. "when home k ?"
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« Reply #14 on: June 18, 2006, 03:05:20 PM » |
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Squall stares at the girl wondering how could somone so small hold so much kindness as he thinks it in his head he hears the girl talking but before he could respawn he falls to the ground unconcious
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« Reply #15 on: June 18, 2006, 05:02:48 PM » |
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(mind editing read my profile im not a little girl. im over 60 elf years like 20)
Lannia see's the man faint. she looks to the guard. "carry him to our house." he looked at her with shock "now!" he hurried about and picked him up. she lead the way back to her house whilst noticing her little sister "tell mother that im heading back" she opened the front door and led them inside. she lead him upstairs there was a long corridor and a small servants room beside hers. "in here" the guard layed him on the bed. " you can go" the guard left hurriedly. Lannia left the room quickly and called a number of servants to her. telling them to clean him up and look after him. she went into her room and looked in the bag. and pulled out the large sword. she felt it under her fingers the cold metal seemed so alien on her ehated skin. she closed her palm an dclosed her eyes a small flame surrounded her fist quickly then vanished.
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« Reply #16 on: June 18, 2006, 07:47:38 PM » |
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squall awakens and all his wounds are bandeged up he looks about the room he's in serching ever corner for his blade.......
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« Reply #17 on: June 18, 2006, 08:18:35 PM » |
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Lannia sighed and put the sword down. getting changed she put on her indoor clothes . she knew her mother would bring back suitors. she was too desperate to get her married off. thinking about it made her hands tingle. she put on the new dress her mother bought for her. she could barely breathe it was so tight and restricking. it made her look so femeinine she hated it. sighing she opened the door. a slave bowed to her. "the man is awake lady." she nodded "very well go and carry on tyour jobs i will see him." she walked into the room. and saw him awake. "hello" she smiled slightly.
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« Reply #18 on: June 18, 2006, 08:23:40 PM » |
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squall says hello to the girl and asks have u seen my sword hoping she understands
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« Reply #19 on: June 18, 2006, 08:30:31 PM » |
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Lannia understood a bit. she understood sword she nooded. "umm..." she pointed to herself. "keep a while?" she pointed at him. "untill know you safe." she looked embaressed. she hadnt quite figured out human language. she wished she had paid attetion more in class. "umm... sorry. no speak much. teach me?"
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